Cussedness Corner

"My work may be garbage but it's good garbage." Mickey Spillane

Mikakke’s new novel, Planet of the Owls: A short review


http://blog.myspace.com/index.cfm?fuseaction=blog.view&friendID=119678285&blogID=389091919

So now we have the second “exclusive” chapter from Mike Philbin’s new novel.  I expect that we will soon have the third, fourth, fifth, ad nauseam “exclusive” chapters to follow.

Trite, stupid, shallow.

Although it is written in first person, there is no feeling of connection with the character.  There is no emotional reaction from the protagonist.  It is very under written.  The visuals don’t click.  The story is constantly interrupted for meaningless joe-explainerisms that cause a disconnect from what little flow there is.

Badly written, Mikakke.  Comprende?

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This entry was posted on May 2, 2008 by in Uncategorized and tagged , , , .

Janrae Frank

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